CELPIP Writing Sample Answers — CLB 9+ Emails & Survey Responses
Full sample answers for CELPIP Writing Task 1 (email) and Task 2 (survey response) at CLB 9+ level. See exactly what high-scoring responses look like.
What CELPIP Writing Scores Actually Reward
CELPIP Writing is scored on four criteria: vocabulary range, task fulfillment (did you address all bullet points?), coherence and cohesion (is the writing organized and logical?), and listenability/readability (is it clear and easy to follow?). The most common reason candidates score lower than exp...
Task 1 Sample: Formal Email
Sample prompt: You ordered a laptop from an online store two weeks ago. You have not received it. Write an email to the store's customer service department. You should: • State when you placed the order and what you ordered • Explain the problem • Request a specific action Sample answer (CLB 9 leve...
Task 1 Sample: Informal Email
Sample prompt: Your friend is planning to move to a new city for work. Write an email with advice about finding accommodation. You should: • Recommend where to look for a place to rent • Give advice about what to look for in an apartment • Suggest a way to save money on rent Sample answer (CLB 9 le...
Task 2 Sample: Survey Response
Sample prompt: Your workplace is considering introducing a 4-day workweek (32 hours, same pay). Answer the following survey questions: 1. What do you think is the biggest benefit of a 4-day workweek? 2. What concerns, if any, do you have about this change? 3. Would you support this change at your wo...
Key Differences: CLB 7 vs CLB 9 Writing
Understanding what separates a CLB 7 from a CLB 9 answer helps you target your improvement: CLB 7 email typically: • Addresses all bullet points but with minimal development • Uses correct but repetitive vocabulary ('good', 'problem', 'please help') • Has occasional grammar or punctuation errors th...
Formal vs. Informal Register — Quick Reference
Getting the register right is one of the easiest ways to gain points on Task 1. Formal signals: • Salutation: 'Dear [Name/Title],' or 'To Whom It May Concern,' • Sign-off: 'Sincerely,' / 'Regards,' / 'Yours faithfully,' • Language: 'I am writing to inform you...' / 'I would like to request...' / 'P...
Common Writing Mistakes to Avoid
1. Missing a bullet point: Read the prompt twice before writing. Each bullet point is a required section, not a suggestion. Missing one will lower your task fulfillment score significantly. 2. Writing too little: Short answers rarely score CLB 9. If your email is under 130 words, you probably haven...
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